“ I did it!!” I yelled, after years of hard work and determination I finally did. I decided to call my invention the lightbulb and it shone in the room lighting up the whole house. A big grin spread across my face as I looked in the mirror. I saw my dark brown hair and my tan skin as my invention brightened the room. “ Mum come look at this!!” I yelled again, she ran in and just stood there in awe. “OMG!! you really did do it” she said. Then suddenly a flash of light flickered, then, darkness.
it is so good but i sort of got lost but it was the best story better than mine from myah $$$$
thanks myah
i know it didnt really make sense but i forgot to read over it 🙂
from Caitlin